PaulTheRing

Hello. Can anyone tell me if the following sentences are grammatically correct?

ATENCIÓN: Deje por favor sus zapatos antes de entrar. Gracias.

AUFMERKSAMKEIT: Bitte kommen Sie nicht mit Ihren Schuhen an herein. Vielen Dank.

ATTENTION: Veuillez laisser vos chaussures avant d'entrer. Merci.

The above are supposed to be on the same line of thought as: ATTENTION: Please do not enter with your shoes on. Thank you.

I'd greatly appreciate your help. I may even bestow a duchy on those who shall help me. "Duke" and "duchess" have a nice sound to them, wouldn't you say?

- Emperor J.P.

PapRoach123

Well, my German is far from perfect but I'm pretty sure that they usually use the word "ACHTUNG:" in these situations, but don't pin me on it.

The rest looks okay to me, heh. "Shuhen" with -en should be correct due to the word "mit" there... "Sie" and "Ihren" with capitals just as they're supposed to be... Yep, looks good I think. But I'm no expert, so

PaulTheRing

Nevertheless, your help is always appreciated, Stinger. Thank you.

- Emperor J.P.

AnotherChick

That one's ok

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PaulTheRing

It's grammatically correct, right? But does it sound natural to you...?

- Emperor J.P.

dids

ACHTUNG: Bitte nicht mit Ihren Schuhen betreten. Vielen Dank.

That sounds good to me.

Bugs Bunny

ATTENTION: Veuillez laisser vos chaussures avant d'entrer. Merci.

This sounds fine aswell.

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AnotherChick

yup, it sounds completely natural

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ManSlippers

GOD I love the spanish language. Mi amor. Mi amor.

RoM

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