€arth Ångel

Read this. This was written by a kid who's not even a teenager. This is the first paragraph of a book, read:

As the crystal clear raindrops dripped off of Kristi Patrick’s golden raincoat, Kristi ran through puddles to get home. Kristi was not like any other girl for there was always something different about her. Whatever she did well, other kids did bad, and whatever other kids did well, she would do badly. There was not yet a soul who would willingly devote their life to her. Kristi didn’t mind. She only had yet a short life to live; everyone’s life was short.

(end of first paragraph)

do you like that? i think it's ok.

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Suzie

I like it. I didn't think it was half-bad especially for a kid who's not even a teenager yet.

€arth Ångel

thanks because when i was 5 years old i wrote that. i am WAY older now, but when i was 5 i wrote that.

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Suzie

Aww! Did you really? That's so cool!!

My older brother writes, he's working on his first book right now. I forget which company, but a really well-known publishing company already asked to publish it. I'm proud of him.

sugarbabe

I like it

Take Care
Ciao
Rita

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BritBaby

That is really great for someone of the age of 5 to write.

Fiction828

That's great for a kid that's not a teenage.