RoM

This is something I wrote in Hebrew and decided to translate to english, I hope i did it well, I tried to make it as good, its written about people who died in wars and terror attacks, its the memorial day for soldiers and terror victims here in Israel and I wrote the song in todays spirit....

The Heros of existance and peace,
We will remember you all.
The Heart aches, the soul bleeds,
Why out of all-you?
A day will come and the quiet will prevail
And your sacrifice and courage well recall.
The heart bleeds, the eyes weep.
The memory stays the soul cries.
The fire of yearning is burning.
In the victory day its you well remember
Every heart
Every soul
Every hero...

Riapanonias

Nice and catchy.

Kattie

Very good, i like it a lot.
It reminds of of Rabin.

LiL Fizzy

Thats really nice, very deep.

RoM

Why Rabin dear?

€arth Ångel

That's a pretty poem, and it touched me, and I'm very sure if you sent it to terroist attacked victims, they'd be touched, too.

There are many people I think of as heros. My friends, my family, Britney Spears. But, the people who died to save others in terrorist attacks are more heroristic (?) to me because they sacrificed themselves for other people, which is a very rare trait found in people these days.

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PapRoach123

That's a very good piece of text. Nice work.

I'm not sure if you're planning to do anything with this English version apart from posting it here, but perhaps you're interested in having the spelling errors removed, to make it even better. I'll light them in red.

Usually, when something is written in a style like this, the periods at the end of each sentence aren't used.

For the rest, you did a great job.

RoM

Thanks Stinger

britneynotagirl

thats really lovley ron it shows you care about things in the world

RocK N SlavE

that reflect perfectly the horror in israel, u did a really good job.