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Old 07-17-2002, 06:11 AM   #1
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Read this. This was written by a kid who's not even a teenager. This is the first paragraph of a book, read:

As the crystal clear raindrops dripped off of Kristi Patrick’s golden raincoat, Kristi ran through puddles to get home. Kristi was not like any other girl for there was always something different about her. Whatever she did well, other kids did bad, and whatever other kids did well, she would do badly. There was not yet a soul who would willingly devote their life to her. Kristi didn’t mind. She only had yet a short life to live; everyone’s life was short.

(end of first paragraph)

do you like that? i think it's ok.
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