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Old 04-19-2002, 09:31 PM   #5
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Yeah, I suggest Kat's five paragraph method, but don't forget that you can have as many points as you need, just be sure you can expand each "point" into an entire paragraph.

Also, make sure you have intros and concluding sentences relating the paragraph back to the thesis...I'm sure you know that already though. In your commentary tell how the facts and figures you are talking about support and prove your thesis statement...

This may be of no help though, I am but a mere high school student.
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