Alright, I have to do a 24 page term paper and it's due next week. But first I need a thesis statement... and I don't have one (well I have one, but the teacher is being mean to me and he doesn't like my thesis statement)
The establishment of child labor laws prevented the exploitation of children in the 20th century
Well. I think that's a really good thesis statement (it's so much better than the previous ones) Except, he said "That's really good. Except you need something more..." It seems to be rather vague and lacking something.
I personally don't know how to write a thesis statement. It has to have a "So what?" and a
PURPOSE. Well I really don't have a purpose except to finish this baby and get an A or something. But.. I need a thesis statement.
Can anyone come up with one for me? Please? Because I've tried so bad and it's just not meeting his requirements.
The topic is about child labor/child labor laws.
Help.
