Originally Posted by T3C

Translated to english. I think you can see what needs changed

I bring the bad news. Mr. Micheal Baxter is dead. He was born twenty and the five of seven and seventy May thousands nine hundred in Vancouver. He had brown hair and eyes coffees. The expensive one was made oval and Mr. Baxter was very low. It was not fat but he was very heavy. Also, he had a moustache. Its profession was executive. The week last in a party in a yacht, he emborrachó and fell the boat in the Atlantic Ocean. The people in the boat tried to save it, but he sank quickly. On the following day, the rescatadores found their body and it brought it to the mortuary. Yesterday, the people said that they saw their ghost that its previous office obsesses. The one of five and thousand October died twenty and two. It was twenty and nine years old.